SVN: livecd/mklive/README

caleb caleb at pld-linux.org
Fri Oct 22 14:33:58 CEST 2010


Author: caleb
Date: Fri Oct 22 14:33:58 2010
New Revision: 11877

Modified:
   livecd/mklive/README
Log:
- English language fixes

Modified: livecd/mklive/README
==============================================================================
--- livecd/mklive/README	(original)
+++ livecd/mklive/README	Fri Oct 22 14:33:58 2010
@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
-mkLive is basic tool designed to create live-cd/live-dvd
-system based on PLD-Linux installation. mkLive is modern, smart,
-and easy to use util.
+Summary
+-------
+mkLive is a basic tool designed to create a live-cd/live-dvd
+system based on PLD-Linux installation. mkLive is a modern, smart,
+and easy to use utility.
 
 
 Features
@@ -34,9 +36,9 @@
 Beerware.
 
 
-mini HowTo
+Mini HowTo
 ----------
-1. install PLD system into directory, e.g:
+1. Install PLD system into a directory, e.g:
  # mkdir /my-sys
  # poldek -r /my-sys
 
@@ -45,7 +47,7 @@
 
 3. Burn iso image on CD/DVD disc
 
-more in help:
+See help for more information:
 # mklive -h
 
 


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