cdg: proponowane-glosowania/wykluczenie_mmazur_z_cdg - A few minor cleanups...

[caleb]

Author: caleb                        Date: Thu Jun 21 19:18:22 2012 GMT
Module: cdg                           Tag: HEAD
---- Log message:
- A few minor cleanups to the English translation

---- Files affected:
cdg/proponowane-glosowania:
   wykluczenie_mmazur_z_cdg (1.1 -> 1.2) 

---- Diffs:

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Index: cdg/proponowane-glosowania/wykluczenie_mmazur_z_cdg
diff -u cdg/proponowane-glosowania/wykluczenie_mmazur_z_cdg:1.1 cdg/proponowane-glosowania/wykluczenie_mmazur_z_cdg:1.2
--- cdg/proponowane-glosowania/wykluczenie_mmazur_z_cdg:1.1	Thu Jun 21 20:45:21 2012
+++ cdg/proponowane-glosowania/wykluczenie_mmazur_z_cdg	Thu Jun 21 21:18:17 2012
@@ -64,16 +64,16 @@
 (Note: my english is far from being perfect. I wasn't able to translate all
 nuances however I kept it as close as I could to the meaning of polish version)
 
-Lets start with a short explanations.
+Lets start with some brief background information.
 
-As you probably know Arkadiusz Miśkiewicz has recently resigned from being PLD
-Th release manager. Soon after that there was announcement sent to PLD mailing
-lists asking if someone wants to step up for this position. One of the
-candidates is Michał Lisowski, former PLD developer with long expirience (CVS
-login "lisu"), who proved himself to be constructive person who doesn't fear
+As you probably know, Arkadiusz Miśkiewicz has recently resigne his position as
+release manager for PLD TH. Soon after that, there was an announcement on the PLD
+mailing lists asking if anyone wanted to step up for this position. One of the
+candidates is Michał Lisowski, a former PLD developer with long expirience (CVS
+login "lisu"), who has proved himself to be a constructive person who doesn't fear
 new challenges.
 
-The candidature of Michał was publicly commented by Mariusz Mazur in the
+The candidature of Michał was publicly commented on by Mariusz Mazur in the
 following way (quote):
 
 "It is no secret that there are no people here who have at least minimal
@@ -86,20 +86,20 @@
 advice from me and if you willl choose not to follow it, it may result in you
 not being elected for release manager)"
 
-Implications directed to candidate for release manager that he doesn't have
-enough knowledge and skills to maintain single line of distribution and that
-he will try to antagonize people to support his "campaign" as well as trying
-to show own superiority over candidate by giving him a slap on the wrist and
-suggesting that not following "good" advice may result in not being elected
-to release manager is in contradiction to the best interests of PLD as a
-distribution (necessity to elect new release manager with almost no candidates).
-
-Such public statements from PLD developer directed to a candidate for release
-manager of one of PLDs version tarnishes his (Michał's) reputation and puts
-PLD as a ditribution in bad light suggesting that there is mistrust among
-developers and internal confliscts do exist.
+The implication, directed at a candidate for release manager, is that he doesn't
+have enough knowledge or skill to maintain a single line of distribution code and
+that he will try to antagonize people to support his "campaign", as well as trying
+to show own superiority over other candidates by giving him a slap on the wrist and
+suggesting that not following "good" advice may result in not being elected as
+release manager is in opposition to the best interests of PLD as a distribution
+(necessity to elect new release manager with almost no candidates).
+
+These kind of public statements from a PLD developer directed to a candidate for
+release manager of one of PLD's releases tarnishes his (Michał's) reputation and
+puts PLD as a ditribution in a bad light, suggesting that there is mistrust among
+developers and that internal confliscts does exist.
 
-Mariusz Mazur continues to publicly criticize PLD developers, for example me
+Mariusz Mazur continues to publicly criticize PLD developers, for example myself
 (Marcin Król). Quote:
 
 "We cannot give credence that you ever were a good candidate for Th release
@@ -107,14 +107,14 @@
 want it and you don't have the final word. You are just unable to do these
 things and we know how your take on the subject has ended."
 
-Stating publicly that a person who was PLD release manager from December 2004
-till January 2008 (if we talk only about official PLD release) or till April
-2011 (if we include unofficial PLD version - Titanium) was incompetent suggests
-that PLD project was badly managed for at least few years and there were no
-consequences for me and nothing was done to make things better. Again, this
-puts PLD in bad light.
+Stating publicly that a person who was a PLD release manager from December 2004
+till January 2008 (if we only consider official PLD releases) or till April
+2011 (if we include the unofficial PLD release - Titanium) was incompetent suggests
+that the PLD project was badly managed for at least a few years and there were no
+consequences for me and nothing was done to make things better. Again, this puts
+PLD in bad light.
 
-A person who makes negative PR for PLD and its developers and who also
+A person who generates such negative PR for PLD and its developers and who also
 intentionally acts to the detriment of PLD shouldn't be allowed any decission
 making position inside the PLD project. Therefor:
 
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