ppcrcd/trunk/doc: README.AirPort2 README.chrp README.usb_boot

sparky cvs at pld-linux.org
Wed Aug 9 22:03:10 CEST 2006


Author: sparky
Date: Wed Aug  9 22:03:07 2006
New Revision: 7644

Modified:
   ppcrcd/trunk/doc/README.AirPort2
   ppcrcd/trunk/doc/README.chrp
   ppcrcd/trunk/doc/README.usb_boot
Log:
- more fixes


Modified: ppcrcd/trunk/doc/README.AirPort2
==============================================================================
--- ppcrcd/trunk/doc/README.AirPort2	(original)
+++ ppcrcd/trunk/doc/README.AirPort2	Wed Aug  9 22:03:07 2006
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 | DEVICE=eth0
 | ONBOOT=yes
 | 
-| WLAN_NICKNAME="ppcrcd" (required)
+| WLAN_NICKNAME="ppcrcd" </<(required)>/>
 | WLAN_ESSID="network_name"
 | WLAN_KEY="s:wep passwd"
 | WLAN_UPEARLY=yes
@@ -42,8 +42,8 @@
 
 = NOTE: Finally I was able to connect :) =
 Looks like <_<ifup>_> wasn't waiting enough for authentication, before
-dhcpcd/pump start. Problem is not resolved yet, but doing everything maually
-it works.
+dhcpcd/pump start. Problem is not solved yet, but doing everything maually
+works fine.
 
-    Driver works really slowly. You need to wait for PPCRCD with 2.6.17 or
+    Driver works very slowly. You need to wait for PPCRCD with 2.6.17 or
 newer kernel for better support.

Modified: ppcrcd/trunk/doc/README.chrp
==============================================================================
--- ppcrcd/trunk/doc/README.chrp	(original)
+++ ppcrcd/trunk/doc/README.chrp	Wed Aug  9 22:03:07 2006
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 === Booting on Pegasos 2 ===
     yaboot works on NewWorld Mac's and older chrp machines, but not on
-Pegasos 2 for it's users there is...
+Pegasos 2. For its users there is...
 
-== annother way for booting ppcrcd: ==
+== annother way of booting ppcrcd: ==
     vmlinuz is chrp-bootable kernel with initrd included, you can boot in
-directly, on Pegasos 2, with SmartFirmware this one should work:
+directly, on Pegasos 2. In SmartFirmware this one should work:
 |	> <_<boot cd:0 boot/vmlinuz>_>
 
     you can optionally add kernel options:

Modified: ppcrcd/trunk/doc/README.usb_boot
==============================================================================
--- ppcrcd/trunk/doc/README.usb_boot	(original)
+++ ppcrcd/trunk/doc/README.usb_boot	Wed Aug  9 22:03:07 2006
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
 |	0 > <_<boot usb1/disk at 1:1,\boot\yaboot>_>
 
 = NOTE 2: =
-    I don't know does all open firmwares have fat support, you can check if
+    I don't know does all OpenFirmwares have fat support, you can check if
 your has typing in OF:
 |	0 > <_<dev /packages ls>_>
 or under linux:


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