cdg: regulations.txt try to improve wording for sentences to make sense

glen glen at pld-linux.org
Mon Jan 23 20:46:01 CET 2012


Author: glen                         Date: Mon Jan 23 19:46:01 2012 GMT
Module: cdg                           Tag: HEAD
---- Log message:
try to improve wording for sentences to make sense

---- Files affected:
cdg:
   regulations.txt (1.11 -> 1.12) 

---- Diffs:

================================================================
Index: cdg/regulations.txt
diff -u cdg/regulations.txt:1.11 cdg/regulations.txt:1.12
--- cdg/regulations.txt:1.11	Fri Jan 28 00:48:09 2011
+++ cdg/regulations.txt	Mon Jan 23 20:45:56 2012
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 Core-Developers-Group
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-The Core Developers Group operates on behalf and in the interest 
+The Core Developers Group operates on behalf and in the interest
 of the PLD Linux Distribution. CDG makes decisions in a democratic
 fashion. CDG is responsible for making decisions that are critical
 to the distribution and for resolving conflicts.
@@ -67,8 +67,8 @@
 
 The vote proposal must be written in a language/languages, which make it
 understandable to all members of CDG. So if, for example, a CDG
-member does not speak Polish, one of the languages the proposal must be
-written in should be a language understandable by that person. On a
+member does not speak Polish, one of the languages - the proposal must be
+written in a language understandable by that person. On a
 similar note, if all members of CDG declare that they understand
 English, it can be the only language a proposal is written in. The
 translation must be done before the vote begins (not necessarily during
@@ -82,11 +82,11 @@
 votes must be signed by a PGP key, of which the public key has been
 already placed inside the PGP-keys module on the cvs server.
 
-The voting period is 48h from the time specified in the announced on the
+The voting period is 48h from the time specified in the announcement on the
 list. In the event of an insufficient turnout, voting may be extended for another
 48h to a maximum of three extensions.
 
-After the completion of voting, the votes that weren't cast are treated
+After completion of the voting, the votes that weren't cast are treated
 as abstentions.
 
 Changes to these regulations or modifications to the membership of CDG
================================================================

---- CVS-web:
    http://cvs.pld-linux.org/cgi-bin/cvsweb.cgi/cdg/regulations.txt?r1=1.11&r2=1.12&f=u



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