cdg: proponowane-glosowania/add_rm_vote - Smoother reading English (no cont...

[caleb]

Author: caleb                        Date: Tue Jun 12 14:21:26 2012 GMT
Module: cdg                           Tag: HEAD
---- Log message:
- Smoother reading English (no content changes)

---- Files affected:
cdg/proponowane-glosowania:
   add_rm_vote (1.10 -> 1.11) 

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Index: cdg/proponowane-glosowania/add_rm_vote
diff -u cdg/proponowane-glosowania/add_rm_vote:1.10 cdg/proponowane-glosowania/add_rm_vote:1.11
--- cdg/proponowane-glosowania/add_rm_vote:1.10	Tue Jun 12 16:00:45 2012
+++ cdg/proponowane-glosowania/add_rm_vote	Tue Jun 12 16:21:21 2012
@@ -17,19 +17,19 @@
 
 *** lang=en
 Do you support the proposal to add a new section to the CDG regulations which
-states that candidature for release manager role and removal from such role
+states that candidature for the Release Manager role and removal from such role
 (except resignation) must be accepted by CDG through a public vote?
 
 Proposed regulations changes below.
 
+ *** Decisions.
+
 -Decisions regarding the facts and dates of new PLD releases.
 +1. Decisions regarding the facts and dates of new PLD releases.
-+2. Decisions regarding appointment to role of release manager of specified
-+   PLD release.
-+3. Decisions regarding removal from role of release manager of specified
-+   PLD release except resignation which can take place wihtout CDG approval
-+   if information about resignation is sent to pld-devel-{en,pl} mailing lists.
-
++2. The appointment of a Release Manager for a given PLD release.
++3. The dismissal of a Release Manager for a given PLD release (other than by
++   resignation which may be done without CDG approval by submitting a notice
++   of resignation to the pld-devel-{en,pl} mailing lists.
 
 Poparcie wniosku o głosowanie/seconding the proposal:
 
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---- CVS-web:
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