cdg: proponowane-glosowania/wykluczenie_mmazur_z_cdg - Split confusing run ...

[caleb]

Author: caleb                        Date: Thu Jun 21 19:35:07 2012 GMT
Module: cdg                           Tag: HEAD
---- Log message:
- Split confusing run on scentence and clarified who is being talked about

---- Files affected:
cdg/proponowane-glosowania:
   wykluczenie_mmazur_z_cdg (1.2 -> 1.3) 

---- Diffs:

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Index: cdg/proponowane-glosowania/wykluczenie_mmazur_z_cdg
diff -u cdg/proponowane-glosowania/wykluczenie_mmazur_z_cdg:1.2 cdg/proponowane-glosowania/wykluczenie_mmazur_z_cdg:1.3
--- cdg/proponowane-glosowania/wykluczenie_mmazur_z_cdg:1.2	Thu Jun 21 21:18:17 2012
+++ cdg/proponowane-glosowania/wykluczenie_mmazur_z_cdg	Thu Jun 21 21:35:02 2012
@@ -86,13 +86,14 @@
 advice from me and if you willl choose not to follow it, it may result in you
 not being elected for release manager)"
 
-The implication, directed at a candidate for release manager, is that he doesn't
-have enough knowledge or skill to maintain a single line of distribution code and
-that he will try to antagonize people to support his "campaign", as well as trying
-to show own superiority over other candidates by giving him a slap on the wrist and
-suggesting that not following "good" advice may result in not being elected as
-release manager is in opposition to the best interests of PLD as a distribution
-(necessity to elect new release manager with almost no candidates).
+The implication, directed at a candidate for release manager, is that the candate
+doesn't have enough knowledge or skill to maintain a distribution release and in
+doing so shows that he may try to antagonize people to support his own "campaign",
+as well as trying to show his own superiority over other candidates by giving one
+a slap on the wrist and suggesting that not following "good" advice may result
+in not being elected as release manager. These behaviors are in opposition to
+the best interests of PLD as a distribution (necessity to elect new release
+manager with almost no candidates).
 
 These kind of public statements from a PLD developer directed to a candidate for
 release manager of one of PLD's releases tarnishes his (Michał's) reputation and
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---- CVS-web:
    http://cvs.pld-linux.org/cdg/proponowane-glosowania/wykluczenie_mmazur_z_cdg?r1=1.2&r2=1.3