cdg: proponowane-glosowania/rm_th_2012 -m Minor English cleanup, no changes...

[caleb]

Author: caleb                        Date: Wed Jul 11 08:23:31 2012 GMT
Module: cdg                           Tag: HEAD
---- Log message:
-m Minor English cleanup, no changes to substance so the clock is still ticking.

---- Files affected:
cdg/proponowane-glosowania:
   rm_th_2012 (1.2 -> 1.3) 

---- Diffs:

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Index: cdg/proponowane-glosowania/rm_th_2012
diff -u cdg/proponowane-glosowania/rm_th_2012:1.2 cdg/proponowane-glosowania/rm_th_2012:1.3
--- cdg/proponowane-glosowania/rm_th_2012:1.2	Tue Jul 10 12:16:36 2012
+++ cdg/proponowane-glosowania/rm_th_2012	Wed Jul 11 10:23:26 2012
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 *** lang=pl
 
 Niniejsze głosowanie ma na celu:
-- dokonanie wyboru Release Managera Th spośród dostępnych kandydatów
-- dokonanie formalnej akceptacji zwycięskiego kandydata jako RM-a Th,
+- dokonanie wyboru Release Managera TH spośród dostępnych kandydatów
+- dokonanie formalnej akceptacji zwycięskiego kandydata jako RM-a TH,
   zgodnie z wymogami regulaminowymi.
 
 Procedura głosowania:
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 3. Zgodnie z regulaminem decyzja podjęta zostaje zwykłą większością
    głosów. Nie jest wymagana 50% obecność.
 4. Za wynik głosowania, zgodny z regulaminową zasadą "zwykłej większości
-   głosów", uznaje się wybór i akceptację na stanowisko RM-a Th kandydata,
+   głosów", uznaje się wybór i akceptację na stanowisko RM-a TH kandydata,
    na którego zostanie oddana największa ilość głosów.
 
 
@@ -36,35 +36,33 @@
 
 *** lang=en
 
-(The reference version of this proposal is the polish one, since that's the
-native tongue of the author. If there are any incompatibilities, the polish
-version takes precedence as the one most likely to reflect what the author
-actually had in mind.)
+(The reference langauge of this proposal is Polish since that's the native tongue
+of the author. If there are any incompatibilities, the Polish version takes
+precedence as the one most likely to reflect what the author actually had in mind.)
 
 
-The following vote will:
-- decide which of the candidates will become the Th Release Manager
-- formally accept the chosen candidate as the RM of Th, in accordance with
+The following vote is to:
+- decide which of the candidates will become the TH Release Manager
+- formally accept the chosen candidate as the RM of TH in accordance with
   the formal requirements.
 
 Voting procedure:
-(Customarily CDG votes are in the yes/no/abstain format and that is what's
-specified in the voting instruction. However said instruction is *not* part
-of the formal CDG rules, meaning alternative voting procedures are not
-against the rules, which makes votes performed according to alternative
-procedures formally valid.)
+(Customarily CDG votes are in the yes/no/abstain format as specified in the
+voting instructions. However this instructions are *not* part of the formal CDG
+regulations, meaning alternative voting procedures are not against the rules,
+rendering votes performed according to alternative procedures formally valid.)
 
-This particular vote defines the following voting procedure:
+This particular vote will use the following voting procedure:
 1. In the section designated to a given candidate, a voting CDG member
    is to enter his CVS login, followed by a colon, followed by the nick or
    last name of the supported candidate.
    For example: "mmazur:bush" or "mmazur:dubya".
 2. One can abstain. (Format: "mmazur:abstain")
-3. In accordance with CDG rules this vote, in order to be effective, does not
+3. In accordance with CDG regulations this vote, in order to be opperative, does not
    require a 50% turnout. A simple majority is sufficient.
 4. In accordance with the formal rule of "require[ing] a simple majority of
    votes" the result of this vote will be the election of and acceptance for
-   the RM of Th position the candidate with the most votes cast to his name.
+   the RM of TH position the candidate with the most votes cast to his name.
 
 Below is the list of candidates, who are active PLD developers and have
 submitted their candidacy on relevant mailing lists:
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---- CVS-web:
    http://cvs.pld-linux.org/cdg/proponowane-glosowania/rm_th_2012?r1=1.2&r2=1.3