PLD-Guide installer.xml,1.7,1.8, wizard.xml,1.6,1.7

[Rafał Kleger-Rudomin]

Module name:    PLD-Guide
Changes by:     klakier

Changed RCS file: /cvsroot/LDP/guide/docbook/PLD-Guide/installer/installer.xml,v
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revision 1.8
date: 2002/06/06 18:25:30;  author: klakier;  state: Exp;  lines: +4 -4
- updates
 

Index: installer.xml
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RCS file: /cvsroot/LDP/guide/docbook/PLD-Guide/installer/installer.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -d -r1.7 -r1.8
--- installer.xml	31 May 2002 16:49:12 -0000	1.7
+++ installer.xml	6 Jun 2002 18:25:30 -0000	1.8
@@ -86,8 +86,8 @@
       floppy disk.
     </para>
     <para>
-      It is possible you will need supplemental disks. Cases
-      when you need addons*.img:
+      It is likely that you will need supplemental disks. Cases
+      when you need addons*.img are:
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>
@@ -126,8 +126,8 @@
       <command>cat bootdisk_image >/dev/fd0</command>
     </para>
     <para>
-      If you are forced to work on [everybody-know-which]
-      non-UNIX OS, you can use rawrite.exe utility, located on 
+      On Win* systems you can also create boot diskette using
+      you can use rawrite.exe utility, located on 
       <link linkend="ftp">FTP</link>, in directory
       <emphasis>/current/[arch]/PLD/dosutils</emphasis>.
     </para>

Changed RCS file: /cvsroot/LDP/guide/docbook/PLD-Guide/installer/wizard.xml,v
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revision 1.7
date: 2002/06/06 18:25:30;  author: klakier;  state: Exp;  lines: +1 -1
- updates
 

Index: wizard.xml
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RCS file: /cvsroot/LDP/guide/docbook/PLD-Guide/installer/wizard.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -d -r1.6 -r1.7
--- wizard.xml	2 May 2002 08:43:40 -0000	1.6
+++ wizard.xml	6 Jun 2002 18:25:30 -0000	1.7
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
   <para>
     During the process you will be asked in interactive way for
     elements of your future system. This is the short list, what
-    kind of information you should you prepare before the start:
+    kind of information you should prepare before you start:
   </para>
   <orderedlist>
     <listitem>